More needed to show that it is "through the lens of a creative person" that we are looking at these objects. Also make it more obvious what the object is (people said they couldn't tell that it was a bottle). Need to see that it's an "ordinary thing being made extraordinary". Maybe try and make an animation of the static frame?
Add some sort of line of vision and then what he sees is creative? etc etc
Other ideas:
- animation of person diving into a pool of paint - immersing themselves in creativity
- a picture book of someone's life up to the point they discover they want to go to university?
- someone who doesnt fit in anywhere and then they come to Massey where everyone fits in no matter how different they are? "inclusive"
- massey logo appears at the end of each
An illustration of an animation for inspiration ;)
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